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“The Never King” – J. Abbott

This is a review of James Abott’s book “The Never King“.

Xavir is rotting in gaol. Sentenced to life in the worst gaol in the lands the once legendary commander is all but forgotten. His elite band of warriors are dead – and the kingdom he was poised to inherit is oppressed by the tyrant who framed him. For half a decade now Xavir has ruled nothing but a prison gang. Yet vengeance comes to those who wait. When a former spymaster comes bearing news of his old enemy’s treachery, plans are forged. A few are compelled to restore peace, but peace and vengeance make poor companions. And first, Xavir must make his escape.

The the world was well-thought out, it was difficult to get to know it because there was no map at all in the book. A small one of Stravimon itself would have been enough. There were forests and hills, mountains and lakes, and villages and towns and cities. There was history and different peoples. The Dacinarians with their giant wolves deserved a book of their own, and the Akero were magnificent!

Elysia was a strong female character, a bit innocent at the start but clearly developing throughout the story. Her mother, though only appearing in a few flashbacks, was equally as strong. Lupara the Wolf Queen was a great representation of a strong warrior and someone who wasn’t afraid of their sexuality. Cedius the Wise was one of the best kings that have recently appeared in fantasy fiction, and the start of the book was extremely well done and very strong.

There are a lot of bad things about this book unfortunately.

Xavir was convinced to leave prison with only a few words, no built-up, no real explanation, no real incentive. After spending six years in gaol that was a bit too quick and easy. Not only that, but throughout the book he mentions several times that they have to be careful and not let the enemy know they are opposing them, and yet he wears his old uniform with the very recognisable insignia and swords he was so famous for. He was also the only person who didn’t have any trouble in the battles. He didn’t stumble, he didn’t slow down, he didn’t feel tired.

For being a commander and career soldier, Xavir did a lot of things that were rookie mistakes, some were even down right stupid and ended up hindering his allies rather than helping them. At one point Elysia asked Xavir if the Solar Cohort used to do assassinations back in the day, and instead of giving her an answer, he gives her an entire speech about feasts he has been on. There is no logic in the progress from one to the other whatsoever.

The worst part was that Xavir could simply walk in anywhere without trouble. Not so much as a stumble. He needs to escape an apparently inescapable gaol? He walks out. He needs to infiltrate the home of the country’s military commander? He walks in. He needs to enter Golax Hold and assassinate two people involved in the conspiracy? He walks in to the town, he walks into the castle, and he walks into a feasting all full of people. He barely kills six people in his quest to get there, he doesn’t sneak around, and no one flees when he comes. The bad guys don’t attempt to flee even, they just ask him if they couldn’t talk in an adjacent room rather than in the full hall. Then they talk and talk and talk. There was no reason to remove themselves from the full hall where the deaths could have far more impact.

While we are on the topic of impacts, the lack of it when it was revealed who was the Red Butcher and the traitor, was painful. One memory of a single scene where the character had a dark look about them – and considering the situation they were in, that look was very much expected and nothing special – is not enough as a hint for the character’s true alliance. There was no shock value, there was no emotion at all because we didn’t get to know that character at all.

Landril’s remark of ‘stranger things afoot’ that he had no information about when two chapters earlier they fought monsters that were clearly inhuman. Although probably meant to signify just how little information the spymaster has about the subject, it sounded like the author had simply forgotten what he had written. He was also annoyingly naïve and innocent at several points from the start to almost the end of the book, and then suddenly he isn’t. The change was far too abrupt.

Valderon was surprisingly (and annoyingly) bashful for an old soldier who had spent time in gaol, and the romance between him and Lupara was beyond awkward. It never led anywhere as if the author realised that it was a no-go, couldn’t be bothered going back to change a few sentences, and then just as awkwardly finished it off. Birgitta spent far too much time berating Xavir for not taking on the father role and then berating him for doing it his own way. In general there was a lot of back-and-forth from each character.

The mystery surrounding the Voldirik people had a lot of potential. It is too bad that said potential never went anywhere. They were the perfect bad guys, they did truly horrible things, but it was impossible to feel anything for them. They were mighty, but couldn’t stand up against the hodgepodge army Xavir and his allies scrunged up. The mystery of their god was revealed three pages after the concept was introduced, and just how stupid are people for not realising what was happening in their capital what with the Voldiriks running around?

A lot of the book was composed of tell rather than show. People updated their friends about something in one sentence and one expects it to be over. But it isn’t. We get the entire conversation in full three sentences later. Xavier’s group of escapees were referred to as ‘the prisoners’ for more than half the book, even long after they had escaped. Then they were suddenly ‘freemen’. A little after that bit came an entire chapter about some sort of celebration Xavir once participated in that had nothing to do with the current story at all. Add to that a lot of useless info-dumping, and a lot of repetition of the info. The author is very fond of the following: supposedly, seemed to, presumably, appeared to. They were used over and over again in situations they had no business being. The author is also in love with the word ‘whilst’.

The second half of the book was definitely the worst one, and I cannot believe that any editor would let this sort of writing pass them by. It would have made a much better story had it been a duology, because as it stands it was badly written and rushed that made it ridiculously simple for the heroes to win over the supposedly unbeatable enemy. And a passable second-to-last chapter was not enough to save it at all.

I do not recomend this book at all.

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Posted by on October 1, 2018 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“The Barrow” – M. Smylie

This is a review of “The Barrow” the first book in the Barrow-series by Mark Smylie.

When a small crew of scoundrels discover a map that they believe will lead them to a fabled sword, they think they’ve struck it rich. But their hopes are dashed when the map appears to be destroyed in a magical ritual, until they rediscover the map in a most unusual and unexpected place. United by accident and dark design, they set out on a quest that will either get them all in the history books…. or get them killed.

The world is very well thought out. It is big and incredibly populated, and well described. The history of the world has been carefully thought out and lovingly crafted, there is no doubt about that at all. It is clear that the Author took inspiration from real life history and cultures, but he also made it his own.

Stjepan’s Athairi past was interesting, and there should have been more of it. Erim was a strong female character generally speaking, and Arduin was a steadfast knight who never went out of character. Leigh was cooky and interesting, and Gilgwyr was a smarmy bastard that made the story fun until the end.

When it comes to the story itself, it was a solid one. Up until the very end of it, where it started to fall apart at the seams. And until then it suffered greatly and was painfully bogged down by bad stuff.

Oh, where to start on the bad stuff?

Too much time was spent on the first one-third of the book, where the characters have to get together. It left the last part of the book – the barrow itself – less than 180 pages, and that is far too little considering the buildup it was given until then.

The characters are rather useless all around. Stjepan didn’t get to do a thing except to guide them from point A to point B, and he was clearly the Author’s Darling. Also, there should have been more hint of his real employers throughout the story. Erim complained a lot about her lot in life, but nothing was done about it. The fact that she was usually hidden away during the journey and we were never really given the chance to get to know her, made the change in Annwyn too sudden. One remark from her maid is all the hint we had, and that was not enough. Leigh and Gilgwyr and Harvald being worshipers of the Nameless Cult was also too sudden. There were no hints of it, no changes in personality until the very end, nothing that the did at the start which might seem out of character for them.

The grammar is some of the worst I have ever seen. There are painfully long, run-on sentences and superfluous information and constant info-dumps about things that are quite useless and irrelevant to the story. There is no need for a two-page essay on which countries do circumcise their children, and which country doesn’t. Or the fact that the main character is carrying a spyglass in his pack, but he doesn’t need it. Nor do we need to know the names and ranks of knights that have fought in a tournament over ten years ago. It was as if the author was trying to emulate Tolkien or even Martin, but fell painfully short on both accounts.

The biggest complaint is the ridiculous focus on sex. Each main character we are introduced to, gets one or more pages of text about their sexual preferences or lack thereof, Gilgwyr’s being the worst by far. Not only that but women are, apparently, sex-obsessed and mad for it, and the only sex they can have is painful and against their will. Men, on the other hand, will always have good, pleasurable, non-rape sex (especially with other men), and if a male character actually forces a woman to do something against her will, then we as readers know that he is evil and that he will die a painful, horrible death.

This brings us to the final complaint: the treatment of women in this story. Three paragraphs into the Erim’s point of view, she has already imagined a complete orgy and just how much she would have loved to join in on it. And also how stupid she felt when she couldn’t count the numerous steps, but the men around her could. Annwyn was such a victim and quite useless until the last 80 pages, where she suddenly turned into a sex-obsessed libertine who raped a man, and then had sex with a corpse animated by magic and maggots before disappearing into the earth with the dead.

All in all, if a couple of dozen editors had the chance to go through the book, then it might actually have been good. As it stands, it is a story of porn dreamed up by an adolescent boy, with some adventure thrown in for good measure, and where the best characters are the secondary ones.

I will most definitely not be touching the second book in the series.

 
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Posted by on July 27, 2018 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“The Gaslight Dogs” – K. Lowachee

This is a review of “The Gaslight Dogs” by Karin Lowachee.

At the edge of the known world, an ancient nomadic tribe faces a new enemy – an empire fueled by technology and war. A spiritwalker of the Aniw and a Cpatain of the Ciracusan army find themselves unexpectedly thrown together, one a prisoner and the other a reluctant student of a forbidden talent. From the rippling curtains of light in an Arctic sky, to the gaslit cobbled streets of the city, war is coming to the frozen north. These two people have a choice that will decide the fate of nations – and may cast them into a darkness that threatens to bring destruction to them all.

Basing the world on the myths and traditions of the Inuit and other First Nation peoples. That is not something one finds every day, and it was a breath of fresh air. The world was populated by tribes akin to Native Americans as well, and a lot of what was happening had obvious roots in the meeting between natives and whites when Europeans reached the American continent.

The world that is made is varied, and the magic that is described and used is very different from what one usually finds in fantasy stories. It is much less refined than what has become the norm, and that sort of primal spirit-based magic was fascinating to read.

The very best thing about this book, though, were definitely the characters. Each one was well-developed and written, though the secondary characters did have a tendency to end up too stereotypical. The best character of them all was Jarrett Fowle himself, closely followed by his father, the General Fowle.

Unfortunately, the pros don’t outweight the cons in this instance.

Flowery language that is – not simply ‘could be’, but is – down right confusing sometimes, as if there are commas or full stops missing. Also it is so flowery that it forced me to start skimming right from the start. Not even the developing mystery could make me want to start reading seriously once more, and the most difficult parts to read were Sjenn’s.

There were too abrupt changes between scenes. Even with the spacing to make it clear, the segue was still too sharp. It got better towards the middle of the book when the two characters were introduced and were at the same place at the same time, but the start of the story was incredibly choppy.

It is also telling, perhaps, that the book is merely the first in a series and though this book was published in 2010 none of the following books have been published . I doubt if they have even been written.

The book had great potential, the characters were excellent, but the execution and particularly the language, left a lot to be desired. I would have to read the following books in order to know if I would or wouldn’t recommend them, but as they aren’t published that kind of falls to the wayside.

So, try this book if you want. The second half of it seems to make the first half worth it.

 
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Posted by on June 26, 2018 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“A Game of Thrones” – G. R. R. Martin

This is a review of “A Game of Thrones” the first book of the series “A Song of Ice and Fire” by George R. R. Martin.

In a land where summers can last decades and winters a lifetime, trouble is brewing. The cold is returning, and in the frozen wastes to the North of Winterfell, sinister and supernatural forces are massing beyond the kingdom’s protective Wall. At the center of the conflict lie the Starks of Winterfell, a family as harsh and unyielding as the land they were born to. Sweeping from a land of brutal cold to a distant summertime kingdom of plenty, here is a story of the fate of the Starks, their allies, and their enemies as each endeavors to win that deadliest of conflicts: the game of thrones.

Short chapters makes it easy to read about characters that aren’t as likeable. It also makes it easier to read in general, and to find good places for a break. Information is given in short bursts, and there is a whole lot of information. The world building is deep and thorough. The scenery is varied and expertly described, populated by peasants and royals, and it feels real even if most of the focus is, obviously, on the royals and the people immediately around them.

It is impossible to mention every character we were introduced to in this book. Suffice to say that everyone is a hero in their own mind, and a villain in someone else’s. The ever changing duality of human nature, and the way humans are fallible and so very liable to ignore things that make us uncomfortable. Some people are too trusting, others too proud, too impatient, too patient, too honest, too honorable. The brashness of youth, the naivete, the painful journey intro adulthood, the loss of family, and the way a life can change in a single day, with a single act.

Unlike some other books, every action has a reaction and it is simply a picture of humanity in all its horrible, terrible, wonderful, beautiful violent glory.

Despite the sheer amount of characters that we follow through the story – both main and secondary – the story never feels bogged down. One never feels like it stops up, like we are re-reading the same day over and over again. The story always pushes forwards at a good pace, and something that happened in one chapter is never showed in another chapter from someone else’s point of view. They might mention it, talk about it, but we as readers never have to re-read it. That is part of what makes the story move on, along with short and concise sentences. There is no flowery language to suffer through here, and the creeping realisation and the discovery of the Others/White Walkers is perfectly sprinkled throughout the story.

Concerning bad things about this book, there are none. There is absolutely nothing that I hated about this book. There are, however, things that I found mildly irritating.

There are a lot of people to keep track of, both main characters and especially the people around them. Yes, it adds realism to the world, it makes it seem populated and grand, but it can be overwhelming and confusing. The charts in the back of the book barely give a hint of what family swears fealty to what house, not who is who, nor do they show any marriages or children. It made it for an overwhelming amount of guess-work as to why such and such should follow the Lannisters or the Starks when their family is actually affiliated with the enemy house according to the appendices.

Younger girls react to boys/men in two ways: either they are scared or they fall for them so hard they almost worship at their feet. Arya Stark is the only exception to this, but she’s written more or less as a boy herself so it almost doesn’t count. Where are the girls who don’t give a fig or aren’t impressed by a fine face? I do miss them in this book. This is a bit annoying, but not overwhelmingly so, but what did bother me a bit more was Daenerys’s quick change of mind concerning Drogo and her relationship. She goes from being terrified and from sex hurting, to liking it and taking charge. In one single chapter. It was a bit too quick, and it would have been far better served to have another chapter covering that progress better. Otherwise it tastes a bit too much of the Stockholm Syndrome.

There was a scene with Tyrion Lannister revealing what seems like a bit too much about his past at a bit too awkward point in the story, but that is also quite a minor thing.

Amazingly enough there wasn’t a single character that I truly hated or even disliked. Sansa was irritating through most of the book, and Jon was a bit annoying with his angst, but it was hardly worth mentioning. The story itself was so strong and powerful that I hardly noticed it, and I didn’t even mind the politicking going around – and usually politics-heavy books aren’t my cup of tea at all. I am definitely going to continue reading this series even if I feel like I need a break between the books so that my cup doesn’t runneth over.

I definitely recommend this series!

 
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Posted by on April 17, 2018 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“The Knight” – P. Pevel

This is a review of “The Knight” which is the first book in the High Kingdom series by Pierre Pevel.

This is the tale of Lorn Askarian. Some say he brought the kingdom to the brink of destruction, taking advantage of a dying king and an unpopular queen to strike against his enemies, heedless of the danger posed by a growing rebellion. Others claim he saved the kingdom, following the orders of a king who had him falsely imprisoned, loyal to the last – fighting against desperate odds on the political and physical battlefields alike. Whatever the truth, whatever you choose to believe, this is his story.

It is written in a simple style, and very easy to read. Despite the book’s size, it is a quick and easy thing to get through. There are enough characters to be interesting, but not so many that things get confusing. And it is obvious that the entire world is vast and with lots of lands and peoples. There are strong signs about the various cultures being influenced by French and Italian culture.

The legend and lore of the dragons was fascinating. The Dragon of Destruction and the Dragon of Destiny and the Dragon of Darkness, they were all pulling the strings behind the scenes. There ought to have been more of them. The few characters of the growing Onyx Guard were interesting to meet, the Queen was ambitious and Alan was a good friend and an excellent prince despite his faults. Lorn himself is a fresh breath of air with coldly sacrificing other people to further his goals – a trait usually given to the bad guys.

The battle scenes were very well written. They were full of action and of surprises, and probably the best thing in the entire book.

Unfortunately there are a lot of problems with this story.

It is written in an omniscient style that removes much of the intrigue. Everything that happens gets an instant explanation, and that reads more like a re-telling of a story rather than the main story itself. Small segments at the beginning of most chapters explain what happens and where people go, removing the need to describe a lot of the characters’ surroundings which made things less real. And there is a lot of telling rather than showing what happens, further weakening the writing.

The omniscient style also hurts the characters. When each of their sentences or actions or thoughts get explained right afterwards, the mystery of the book is gone. With it goes any and all desire to get to know the characters, because they are already explained to minute detail. Thanks to that most of the characters seem quite shallow and not worth investment. Lorn is the only character that isn’t over-explained, but in return some of his decisions seem a bit too out of the left field because there were absolutely no hints about them.

When it comes to the mystery surrounding Lorn’s initial accusation that landed him in jail, and even the enmity between the High Kingdom and Yrgaard, they were mentioned so much that they lost their significance. When the revelations came it was difficult to care about them, especially about Lorn’s big secret. They talked about it, but there were few hints at what it could have been, and these hints were far too vague to be considered interesting or very valuable.

The writing is solid, the story is solid, but the way it was executed? Not as much.

It was an okay book all around, but nothing special.

If the second book had been translated from French, then I think I would have liked to read it sometime in the future.

 
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Posted by on February 12, 2018 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“Wraith Knight” – C. T. Phipps

This is a review of the book “Wraith Knight” by C.T. Phipps

The King Below, enemy of the world, is dead. Will his successor save the world… or rule it? Jacob Riverson was once the greatest hero of an age, but cut down during what was supposed to be the final battle against the King Below, he was condemned to centuries of torment as a Wraith Knight in the King Below’s service. With the destruction of his master, Jacob regains his free will, and discovers that he’s in a world torn by civil war. Now he must determine whether he has any place in the new world, and whether his destiny is as a hero or a monster. Or both.

The story takes place in a vast world, but the world itself is left mostly for the readers to imagine. There are small explanations and expositions about the various climates and natures, but it doesn’t play the main role of the story. Still, it was more than enough to get a rough overview.

There is a lot in this book about the philosophy of good versus evil. There is a lot about choice and consequences, about how one cannot exist without the other, and that most beings are actually somewhere in the grey area between. The book manages to avoid becoming too preachy, too, and instead lets the conflict be embodied in the main character Jacob.

The character of the Trickster/King Below was a delight to read. His snarky remarks, his apparent hidden plots and urging, and then the truth about him. He was never considered a “misunderstood” being, and that just made him even more likable.

Thomas and Jacob were excellent characters. Thomas was a delight to read despite being in the story only for a very short time. Jacob’s story was well thought out, simple and yet convoluted. His doubts, his nightmares and his fears were perfectly understandable. Especially after being under the King Below’s rule for over two centuries. Even the way he dealt with his feelings about Jassa and what all that included (forgotten or not) was believable.

The Golden Sorceress and the fate of Jassa, and the way the Lawgiver and his religion has developed, was truly inspired. It is so  very rare to read something like that in fantasy of any age. Regina and Serah were a bit more wobbly in their characterisations, but not so much that it was an annoyance. These wobbly incidences also happened during times of great emotional stress, so it could be deliberate.

Unfortunately, there are several bad things with this book.

For one there are countless writing mistakes. Either editors weren’t used or they didn’t do their work properly. The structure of some of the sentences is also a bit confusing occasionally.I have been in contact with the author and there has been a lot of trouble with the publishing company. It has gone so far as to end up in court. That is the reason for all the truly horrenduous writing mistakes. Luckily the story itself was more than strong enough to push past these mistakes.

There is also a bit too much trust going on all around between characters who, though desperate, shouldn’t trust each other quite this easily. Not only that but the happenings in the story are solved a bit too easily despite all talk about dangers. It is a bit simple.

Despite these faults, the story and the characters are strong enough to push through. The book was truly a delight to read and I couldn’t put it down.

This is definitely a book that I recommend!

 
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Posted by on December 12, 2017 in Books, Fantasy

 

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“Black Wolves” – K. Elliott

This is a review of “Black Wolves” by Kate Elliott.

Twenty-two years have passed since Kellas, once Captain of the legendary Black Wolves, lost his king and with him his honour. With the King murdered and the Black Wolves disbanded, Kellas lives in exile far from the palace he once guarded with his life. Until Marshal Dannarah, sister to the dead King, comes to him with a plea: re-join the palace guard and save her nephew, King Jehosh, before he meets his father’s fate.

There are very strong inspirations from all corners of Asia. All the empires and peoples mentioned in the book are very clearly inspired by real-world ancient empires. Though it can sometimes be a bit confusing to differentiate the clans and peoples, usually it only adds a certain zest to the story that most European-based fantasy stories lack.

Kellas is a fascinating character to read about. He was excellently written as a young man, but he is far more interesting to get to know as an old man of about seventy or so. Not many stories have such an old man as one of the most important main characters. His knowledge and experience comes through in all that he does, as well as all the years he has spent working in the shadows, away from the court. King Jehosh was just as excellent, well-developed and amazing until the very end which ruined him completely as a character.

Sarai starts out as an okay character, with more or less only her secret relationship with another girl to actually make her interesting. It is a shame that this relationship is barely mentioned and only showed proof of once. Dannarah is a strong character, almost overpowering, but it makes sense with her past. Queen Chorannah’s vicious maneuvering is excellently written, and old King Anjihosh was one of the most fleshed-out characters to appear even though he only lasted for about forty pages. His son, Atani, was almost as good.

The mystery of the plot – the who-dun-it and the why – is excellent and convoluted. The political intrigue is also interesting. The various queens and their factions, the Silvers/Ri Amarah, the princes, the various empires surrounding the Hundreds, and, most of all, the demons themselves. The demons are the most interesting, kept hidden and mysterious. What their plans are is the thing that drives the plot forwards and which helped me stay with the book to the end, as well as the apparently many different types of supernatural creatures though we barely get a hint of those.

The writing occasionally dips into the realms of harlequin romances both with the way the words are strung together, and also with how much focus there is on people being aroused in the oddest and most inappropriate of situations. The way some of the characters react when confronted with someone they find desirable, is almost to the point of the ridiculous. A young, inexperienced person reacting like that sounds believable. A seventy-something old man meeting an old lover? Not so much. There are also instances of instant romance when two characters apparently just fit together.

Too much time is spent introducing characters and setting things up after the first part of the book. More than three hundred pages pass before the story picks up again, and there were so many characters introduced and so many plot-lines, that it was almost enough to kill any desire to read further. It was simply too slow and too few things happened that would seem to have any bearing on the plot. The author also occasionally repeats certain things over and over again as if to hammer it into your head that this particular thing will be important in the very close future.

Some of the characters seem a bit superfluous so far, only adding to the confusion since there are so many characters in the book altogether. Gil’s transformation upon his marriage was a bit too over the top, Dannarah suddenly being revealed to have forced Kellas into a relationship once upon a time, didn’t fit with her character. Prince Tavihosh seems like a caricature compared to others, and Lifka – though an excellent character – almost seems to be forced in with her story. It might have been better to leave her out for now, or altogether. The final reveal of the bad guy’s plans and reasons was pathetically simple. It was down right ridiculous.

Considering this is a book of almost 800 pages where the first 500 were quite boring and seemed to have little to do with the overall story, this is a slow book that requires a whole lot of patience to read. Perhaps a bit too much patience, but a did get through it with some skimming occasionally, and the last part was interesting enough to make me want to read the sequel. But not right now, and most likely not anytime soon. I need a break from this story.

It’s good and I recommend it, just be patient with it.

 
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Posted by on October 11, 2017 in Books, Fantasy

 

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